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    dots Submission Name: Sister Citiesdots
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    Author: eliwhitneyradio
    Elite Ratio:    3.15 - 49/51/13
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This poem was in my head for a few months, felt good to finally get it down on paper.


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    dotsSister Citiesdots
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    It's been too long since
    we've spoken, but I always
    think of you. Wrap kisses
    in clouds and blow them your
    way. Thank you for the traffic
    jams, they were delicious.

    You're welcome. I see pictures
    of you sometimes, after scandals,
    snow storms, sporting events. Where'd
    you get your skyline done? It looks
    really cute. I pray for massive
    earthquakes just so I can slide onto
    your couch with you.

    That's kind of selfish, but I catch
    your continental drift. If only the
    longitudes weren't painted on we'd have
    lassoes to yank each other closer.

    You think you're some sort of cowgirl,
    don't you? Still, I know how you feel.
    Like time plays zone defense just to keep
    us apart. And the balloons of our annual
    parades pop questions at the teams who
    constantly fail to win us pretty rings.

    I have to go now. One of the suburbs is
    crying. Oh, and I love your new park system,
    I'm totally green with envy. Goodbye.

    Alright, there are dying plants I've been
    neglecting, best I get to them before they
    close down. Tell your new airport I said Hi.
    It looks nice. Mine is so plane, sorry couldn't
    resist that one. I love you!




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