I like this until the dildo part and the condom part, it would of sounded better without it, but if that's all that remains of your relationship then perhaps just leave out the toaster and microwave from that section would make it sound better. But it sounds like from this poem that you just feel like another piece of trash that she threw out. Its sad and sounds like a bad trip, but I can't say I have ever tipped, so what good am I at guessing.
It's no good when all that's left is the sex..the sex. i understand from this that a relationship has gone sour or is sour but either one is willing to speak. giving only nasty looks. or it could be some [censored] who is just staring and you don't like it..either way it was good, except for the halucination part...explain it to me please.~Damien vladimir09
Submission Name: A Single Backward Glance 
