This poem had a lot of meaning and feelings that bled out from your sentences, but I see this not as a longing kind of poem, but more of a love letter...I'd expect that your crying out for that person to come, but for some odd reason, I have this strange feeling that you already deep down in the pit of your heart, you know who that one person is...But here I am rambeling on about that thing that fools would call love...All it leads is to destruction and torment...Well good luck anyways
Wow, totally an amazing poem! I love it, one of the favorites of mine. Your wording it so good and it really makes you think about whoever is out there waiting for you...and when you will find them! SO good!
Soulmates... how most people believe on it and live the rest of their life hoping that one day they will meet their soulmate.. that was the same idea in this lines:
someday, may seem forever away stretched upon the cruel claws of fate our day will be worth the wait when i find you
Though i dont believe in soulmate so much.. this poem here would make me as a reader stop for a while and think... uhm... where could my soulmate be???... Soulmates for me are quite a mystery in life...
Do you know the part that i would consider as the best?? here it is
and the stars will tremble at the power we hold as two halves combine i will find you
it ended this piece very sweetly and it kinda pulled my heartstrings..