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    dots Submission Name: You Liedots
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    Author: Zakaria Glenza
    Elite Ratio:    0.84 - 3/6/65
    Words: 280
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsYou Liedots
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    You lie,
    Doesn't matter to whom,
    To the old or to the new,
    You lie,

    When you tell me with a special tune that you love me,
    You lie,
    Oh, when you tell him the same thing with a different tune,
    You Lie!

    Whenever someone lies to me, he just does break my heart,
    You did,

    Please don’t lie when you will announce the father’s name of your kid…

    Do you really know his father!
    Is there any potential another?

    …You lie!

    Now wait, I want to remind you things you said about the one you're lying to,
    You said you hate him, because he didn't like the story about me and you,
    Now you love him as if you had loved no other,
    May be you're trying to forget another,
    And I guess the one you want forget is me!
    Oh, I can't believe that the one you want to hate is me!
    You lie!

    You lie and I just can't wait,
    To tell you about someone I hate,
    You lie and your lies were great,
    I can't forgive you; oh it's much too late!
    You lie,
    Because you once said you loved me,
    You lie,
    As today you say you don't,
    I'd lie, if I'd say I've didn't love you,
    But I wouldn’t, if I say I won't…

    Now listen:
    The eternal slavery is living inside a lie,
    Freedom is the knowledge of the fact that the truth would never die…
    There is an only one eternity, what would you choose?
    The truth, that would get you high or the lies that will make you lose?





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