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    dots Submission Name: You Were My Falldots
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    Author: kcasey
    ASL Info:    19/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 12/17/13
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Trapped
    Total Views: 182
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1000



    Description:
       Fighting with depression and I feel lost without him. I actually thought he was worth it. But I'm not going to let him bring me down.


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    dotsYou Were My Falldots
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    You were my fall
    But now that winter has come
    I'm raking up my leaves
    And burning them
    You are nothing to me

    But inside, I'm lying in bed
    I haven't moved from this place in days
    I can't go outside, it will get me again
    It took two months of fighting to get over it last time
    I'm not letting it in

    I've placed boards over all my windows
    and locked my doors
    I wont let it back in
    I'll lay in this bed all winter if I have to
    If that's what it takes to forget you

    Inside the skies are clear
    It's never been like this before
    Its usually raining on me
    And everyone else is outside in the sun
    But I was getting better
    Till you came back to my door.
    But I wont open up this time
    I'm not falling for you lines
    I'm happy in here, even if I have to be alone




    Submitted on 2007-12-11 08:34:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was written very well. I know exactly how you feel. I just got out of a relationship that I was in for a year and half. My ex led me on to believe there was a chance of fixing us, but when he got his last 'jollies' he said he didn't want me anymore. It sucks, but it's overcomable. (?) Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep reading

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    | Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]
      im pretty sure i love this. i like the message it sends. sounds a little teanager-ish...but i like it alot
    | Posted on 2007-12-11 00:00:00 | by MartiniMadeLvr | [ Reply to This ]



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