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the players


Author: thewantedwords
ASL Info:    28 male sydney
Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 40 /40 /37
Words: 30
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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Description:




the players



Were all players in this game,
But isnt it cool i remembered your name,
Just for fun or a casual fling,
I need you on top to make me sing.




Submitted on 2007-12-11 16:25:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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