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    dots Submission Name: Miserydots

    Author: Jakirina
    ASL Info:    19/F/WI
    Elite Ratio:    3.69 - 216/200/80
    Words: 345
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 501
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2242

       Another Triple Sonnet. Woo!

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         you have me upon my knees,
    palms heavy and cold against sterile ground.
    Your crystalline fingers caress and tease
    the frigid skin behind my grey neck, bound
    to respond only to you. Your fleshless
    digits trail ice to the base of my spine,
    lingering there, telling me I possess
    no part in this game. Your tongue, divine
    and calloused, plasters along the side of
    my throat and slowly down my lower back.
    I tremble, hands lily-blue, aware my love
    is only illusion as is this lack
    of weight upon my arms and legs. I barely
    feel you hold me up, hand spanning my belly.

         you pull me towards you, I obey,
    flowing with your rhythm. I watch my spirit
    cloud and billow through my breath as you flay
    me from behind, moving erratically, spit
    dripping between my shoulders. Your right fist
    becomes a dagger, thrusting against my
    hip and side; an odd pain that won’t desist
    inside, yet I cannot feel upon my
    flesh. Thigh and ribs swell with warm pulsing
    color, yet your left hand stables my core. You stop
    my collapse. You’re not done. Nails fitting
    deep into my stomach, blunt teeth drop
    into my shoulder. Yet my delusion
    of ardor keeps me from dissolution.

         my elbows crumble, chipping
    like frost, my face would have shattered had your
    daggered hand not been there, quickly winding
    into my hair. But it was too much, for
    my right side fell and your nails came away
    with flesh trailing beneath them. My chest hit
    heavily, forcing my last spirit to stray
    in a torrent of frightened smoke. Yet it
    did not deter your lust only heightened
    your finale. A pounding darkness played
    behind my eyes as you came to your end
    and released me. I could feel myself fade
    from your interest, I was your broken toy.
    Your fleshless face clicked its black teeth: Good boy.

    Submitted on 2007-12-11 16:39:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I was enticed by your miraculous words.

    Yet I had a feeling that you had been imagining the misery, not as though you really were sad, or more of a feeling of it being more of an empty loneliness.

    Overall I felt the sadness streaming, line after line.

    Very good, yet saddening.
    | Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by Teriyaki | [ Reply to This ]

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