Did you -------------------------------------------
Did you ever cut your wrist
Did you do it late at night
Did you ever almost cry
Did you wonder why
Why the pain cant get any worse
How your friends don’t even notice
You did it once, then twice
Now your sitting with the knife
Still carving at your skin
You cut the line across your left wrist
Now you try and quit
Its hard to when
When your followed by the scar
You feel so numb inside
You do it once again
Taking a deep breathe
Then you cut yourself
NOW your friends notice
Its too late now
You tell them it isn’t true
But they still don’t listen to you
How can they trust the person that’s a cutter
They beg and the cry
But YOUR still up at night
Pulling that thing across your skin
You stop caring anymore
The one who was once adored
Lost her very life
To the one person she could trust
Now as YOU cry
You know your ready to die
But remember this
She never had her first kiss
this was a very powerful poem, it flowed nicely and once i started reading it kept me hooked, its full of emotion and was very upsetting
if this is true to you try not worry, things have to get better they cant stay bad for ever and talking to someone about it even if its just one person really does help
the ending is really good and ended the poem off nicely
great work
Submission Name: Did you
