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    dots Submission Name: Is It True?dots
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    Author: Specialme
    ASL Info:    17 / female / Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 8/11/7
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 1000
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 517



    Description:
       this was written one day when i was full hope that my life was getting better, um plz comment thanxs


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    dotsIs It True?dots
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    Slowly getting better
    Starting to see hope again
    Is this true?
    Is this really happening?

    No, I'm not dreaming
    Itís really getting better
    How long will it go on for?
    Hopefully forever

    I can start to see
    The old me again
    Some smiles are no longer fake
    Some laughs no longer forced

    It really is getting better
    Please donít let me fall again
    Because next time I wonít
    Get back up




    Submitted on 2007-12-12 01:10:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good poem! I really liked it... it has great imagery and it has really good rythem! I enjoyed it

    Britt
    | Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]


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