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    dots Submission Name: How do i tell you?dots
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    Author: Specialme
    ASL Info:    17 / female / Australia
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 8/11/7
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 794
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1346



    Description:
       yeah as you can tell i really like someone at the moment so um comment plz thanxs


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    dotsHow do i tell you?dots
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    I love you
    But donít know how
    To tell you

    I want to be with you
    Hold you
    Kiss you
    And never let you go

    You make me feel special
    You make me feel wanted
    You make me want to keep living
    You understand me

    I trust you with my life
    I trust you with my heart
    I trust that you will never hurt me

    I want to know if you feel the same
    I want to know if you care
    I want to know if we can ever be

    I want to tell you
    That I love you
    But I donít know how

    Every time I hear your voice
    Every time I see your smile
    Every time I talk to you
    I fall deeper and deeper into love

    You showed me that there was hope
    And told me not to let go
    You helped me think of the good things in life
    And cause of you, Iím still here today

    I want to tell you
    That I love you
    But I donít know how

    If you feel the same
    Will we be
    If not will we even
    Still be friends

    Iím confused and donít know
    What to do
    All I know, is the love
    I have for you, is real

    I love you
    I want to tell
    I just donít know how




    Submitted on 2007-12-12 01:12:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This writing has a lot to do with my life... someone has changed me for the best she could...
    I have had bad relationships but none to really judge because things happen....lol... your writing has a lot of meaning in it... your words are great within this summary.
    | Posted on 2007-12-15 00:00:00 | by Gmann | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, the guy you wrote this for is one lucky person, such a true honest and giving love only deserves the same in return, beautiful, truly beautiful.

    | Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by Instep | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked this!
    you know, sometimes you can love from a distance, and never even talk to the person. and it can even be better at times this way. I know from some bad experiences, that the real people behind faces often lie, so its sometimes best to love a face, because a face can never betray you.
    | Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by marigold | [ Reply to This ]


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