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    dots Submission Name: Shut Updots
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    Author: WhY-dO-yOu-CrY
    ASL Info:    17/F/ConnUSA
    Elite Ratio:    5.51 - 131/79/78
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 165
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 536



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       My friend pissed me off. grabbing my arm, and saying he'll start up again if I do also. but i found a loop hole. i never stopped.


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    dotsShut Updots
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    your exact words, "start, then i'll start"

    Don't you ever lay that one me,

    Don't make me feel even more guilty then i already do.

    You don't know my life, so don't tell me to stop.

    I'll stop when i want.

    Which won't be soon.

    I was having a good day,

    Thanks for ruining it.

    But i won't give the satisfaction of letting you know.








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      i honestly have no idea what tis is about but i kind of took my own meaning to it i was not even a month ago so adicted to coca that i was doing almost 15 to 20 grams a day people would tell me to slow down and stop and i just thought they didnt want me to be happy iv been clean for a month now and feel alot better about my self so all im sayin is dont be so hard on your freind for trying to stop u from doing wat ever it is u are doing i think they just want to help cuz they either love or care about u an i really like the scatterness of the pome it was nice
    | Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by pasardspandora | [ Reply to This ]
      thats the spirit! so many times people will try to get you down, in so many ways, sometimes you wonder if they have nothing else to spend their energy on. but its because there is something special about you, otherwise they would not get anything from bringing you down, and thats the truth, so even though its very hard, its best to learn to totally disregard them. when they can no longer get energy from you by bringing you down, they will stop, because thats what they want, a part of you, don't give it to them!
    | Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by marigold | [ Reply to This ]


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