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For love

Author: xaingua
ASL Info:    16/Female/A quiet place
Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 11 /9 /11
Words: 134
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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I wonder.

For love

I've been so innocent up until now
I fell for you and I don't understand how
All of a sudden reality's blinded
If feels like my commensence simply resided

I want you so close, But I want you to leave
I fall into pieces when you look at me
How come I couldn't see this thing comeing?
Usually I am the one who is running

You save your special smiles to me
I wided my eyes, but I don't want to see
I can't see us together forever
But I can be there whenever, wherever

I talk in my sleep and it's all about you
I'm torn between living my dreams and you
Is this a sign, where you sent from above
To tell me I am ready for love?

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