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    dots Submission Name: For lovedots

    Author: xaingua
    ASL Info:    16/Female/A quiet place
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 11/9/11
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsFor lovedots

    I've been so innocent up until now
    I fell for you and I don't understand how
    All of a sudden reality's blinded
    If feels like my commensence simply resided

    I want you so close, But I want you to leave
    I fall into pieces when you look at me
    How come I couldn't see this thing comeing?
    Usually I am the one who is running

    You save your special smiles to me
    I wided my eyes, but I don't want to see
    I can't see us together forever
    But I can be there whenever, wherever

    I talk in my sleep and it's all about you
    I'm torn between living my dreams and you
    Is this a sign, where you sent from above
    To tell me I am ready for love?

    Submitted on 2007-12-12 16:58:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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