Garden of Roses by skinnard

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Submission Name: Garden of Roses dots

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Author:	skinnard
ASL Info:	22 male New York
Elite Ratio:	2.17 - 38/76/49
Words:	128

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Garden of Roses dots

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Tall grass ripples through my fingers

As I walk forward

Walking leisurely without a care

All problems I discard

Enjoying the fragrance

Until I reach the white roses

How they smell of your scent

And hold their elegant poses

I pick one up, what a mistake

Rabidness at the smell of blood

Instantly filled with hate

Blood red tears stain the pedals

Amber fire rages through my eyes

And here I am surrounded by you

I lose my disguise

Drop my fascade and drop to my knees

What painful memories

All that is left is to burn it all down

A shame such beauty is sent to the ground

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