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    dots Submission Name: Garden of Rosesdots
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    Author: skinnard
    ASL Info:    22 male New York
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 38/76/49
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGarden of Rosesdots
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    Tall grass ripples through my fingers

    As I walk forward

    Walking leisurely without a care

    All problems I discard

    Enjoying the fragrance

    Until I reach the white roses

    How they smell of your scent

    And hold their elegant poses

    I pick one up, what a mistake

    Rabidness at the smell of blood

    Instantly filled with hate

    Blood red tears stain the pedals

    Amber fire rages through my eyes

    And here I am surrounded by you

    I lose my disguise

    Drop my fascade and drop to my knees

    What painful memories

    All that is left is to burn it all down

    A shame such beauty is sent to the ground




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