You've lost it all you can't go back
How does it feel when your mind goes black?
Such sinister thoughts for an ordinary girl
Whose too twisted and morbid for this unfair world
Inside you're screaming, in your heart lies a beast
Your anger and tenseness is on what it will feast
The drama titled lies and you are the star
Go on and smile like the darling your fans think you are
Have you reached the point where you need to break?
Is this thing we call reality getting too hard to face?
Is your fear consuming you like you always knew it would?
Are the voices confusing, not letting you do what you know you should?
Not bad at all, great flow.
Hope to see the finished project.
It does show the true side of insanity.
I am going to post one up soon, hope ya take a look at it. Well, send me a PM or something when ya finish it.
I like how it is a story sort of, with the truths of voices breaking through, but like I've said because.
A poem is to be judge by others and interoperated as something they see.
Even though I see it differently, you might have a whole new scheme then I can see, great job, I really liked it.