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No Secret


Author: Instep
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ruff, cpy, rambling, would appreciate comments though!


No Secret



I live in a dream where tears fall louder than screams,
I have been addicted to drugs, fuck it, no secret, I enjoy being free.
But I know who I am, and what my truth happens to be,
I was like this before this, I'm probably a lot more normal than you think,
Go get caught up in your high and mighty acts, I have seen the world that creates that, let me tell you that I'm not a part of it.
They say that my spirit is starting to give, they think they ultamitly steer, they can think what they like I still don't give a shit,
I have a lot of family and friends, a clear form of reality to keep me in check, I never fear, I dream, its no act I actually believe,
I have my eye on the ones who cut me once, Shame on you, if you cut me twice I will break on through to the other side, i'll do it on my own, rely on banked hope, I didn't come alone and you don't really know.




Submitted on 2007-12-13 05:19:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  That second sentence was very bold. i liked it.
"I have been addicted to drugs, [censored] it, no secret, I enjoy being free."
not that i do drugs myself, but i have a boyfriend that does and this shows me a little more how he probably feels.
very good write. different than i usually like to read but enjoyable.
</3 lisa
| Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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