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Annoyed When.

Author: Instep
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just thoughts popping up, any thoughts in reply would be great

Annoyed When.

Annoyed When.

When they keep on thinking they know, they search but they never see the truth, I'm not seem freak of a being that actually does all the things that you seem to think I would do.
Sometimes it makes me fear that nothing is real between me and you, just looking at the traps that were set, I'm not going to pretend I'm glad I had some better friends.
We could be discussing this over a wine or beer, but you choose to be hear talking in a fairytales sphere.

Submitted on 2007-12-13 05:37:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was deep and well written, i can really see the emotion and it flowed nicely, although the second paragraph i had to read twice to understand it properly
i really like the line " they search but they never see the truth" in my opinion thats a very powerful line
great write :)
| Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by Specialme | [ Reply to This ]

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