Annoyed When.

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Annoyed When.

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Annoyed When. When they keep on thinking they know, they search but they never see the truth, I'm not seem freak of a being that actually does all the things that you seem to think I would do. Sometimes it makes me fear that nothing is real between me and you, just looking at the traps that were set, I'm not going to pretend I'm glad I had some better friends. We could be discussing this over a wine or beer, but you choose to be hear talking in a fairytales sphere.

Submitted on 2007-12-13 05:37:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this was deep and well written, i can really see the emotion and it flowed nicely, although the second paragraph i had to read twice to understand it properly i really like the line " they search but they never see the truth" in my opinion thats a very powerful line great write :)

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