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Submission Name:
how i am
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Author:
jjd
ASL Info:
20/male/Griffin, Ga.
Elite Ratio:
2.11 - 20/83/38
Words:
34
Class/Type:
Poetry/Love
Total Views:
1975
Average Vote:
5.0000
Bytes:
197
Description:
how i am
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at morn-at noon-at twilight dim,
the love flows through the wind all over again,
and how i see her is how i am,
no matter what i say,
She'll be there intel the end!
Submitted on 2007-12-13 13:08:13
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cool!! sooo sweet!!!
love,
~Liz~
| Posted on 2009-07-12 00:00:00 | by
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I liked this one, but I agree with Dismal, the last line didn't really flow all that well. Great work!
| Posted on 2008-01-17 00:00:00 | by
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Very sweet. Cute, and nicely flowing. Short and simple but well written.
Nice job ;)
| Posted on 2007-12-17 00:00:00 | by
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awww. cute..
But the last line doesnt really flow. like the rest of the poem did
~Carrie
| Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by
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