Description: i wrote this today in my first period, i really like it. i hope you do too. i wrote it for E.S.
:)
Up in That Tree -------------------------------------------
What was that?
I just did see...
A snake?
A Dragon?
A part of me?
It ran!
It hid!
Up in that tree!
I looked up...
and what did i see?
in shock i said:
"can it be?"
holy moley
talking cow
it is my love
Up in that tree
Can you get it down for
me?
o my!
i must say that this is a very fun poem. the rhyming of it reminds me of one of those Sheal Silverstine poems. its quite wonderfuly random. koodles!
maybe a little longer would be a little bit better. hmm.elborating can be a good thing but beware. it can also be a very bad thing. you know, too much of a good thing can be a very bad thing. the whole flow of the poem it quite nice. im not much of a fan for free verse or blank verse. so it made me very happy to read this because of its lack of both.
Submission Name: Up in That Tree
