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    dots Submission Name: Breathe Bindingdots

    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    26/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 34/223/160
    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       yeah, so I love books. What of it?

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    dotsBreathe Bindingdots

    Read a book
    Turn the page
    Gently before it flies away
    Learn something
    Dipped in metaphors
    Treat your mind in the very best way
    Scan the words
    Soak them up
    Every single day
    If literature
    Can be a love
    He'd be my bridesgroom one day
    Buttoned up
    In his binding
    I'll tell him to breathe
    My pondering hands
    Resting on
    white pages, neat
    Saying "Darling, I'll never leave."

    Submitted on 2007-12-13 13:50:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I enjoyed this very much! I adore books ::happy sigh:: - very nicely done!
    | Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by Mandi Gayle | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice stuff! A superbly written poem, with voice, imagery and clarity.

    Yes, we are curious creatures, and we must satisfy that intellectual curiosity.

    When you read, then you stretch the mind. When you write, you shall tell a story.

    Its wonderful the things we can do, if let our mind grow.

    We must maintain a hunger and thirst for knowledge.

    The mind and soul require sustenance.

    I enjoyed reading this short poem with a message for life-goal of learning

    Go bless and continue telling the truth with paper and pen.

    | Posted on 2007-12-29 00:00:00 | by FireFly747 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really enjoyed this
    I too am a bookworm if you will
    Not a day goes by that I dont pick up a book to add some more knowledge to my mind
    As you know a person never stops learning and the best way to learn is to relax comfortably reading a good book
    Excellent Job!!!
    I look forward to reading more from you in the future
    God Bless
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    | Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      I dont know if my hands would rest on the pages, but my thumbs would. LOL. Anyway, great poem, and keep up the good work!

    (>'.')> You've been commented by NEORaven
    | Posted on 2007-12-13 00:00:00 | by NEO Raven | [ Reply to This ]

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