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    dots Submission Name: heartbreaks, letdowns, and shattered hopes. oh mydots
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    Author: black rose13
    ASL Info:    16/f/where do I live?
    Elite Ratio:    1.35 - 137/97/39
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsheartbreaks, letdowns, and shattered hopes. oh mydots
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    Another love.
    Another heartbreak.
    Another hope.
    Another letdown.
    How can she be optimistic
    with her heart always shattered.

    She derserves the best of love.
    But all she gets is ignorance.
    Go ahead and shatter
    something that just isnt there.

    whatever it takes.
    She'll do it.
    (just to feel whole again)

    Another love.
    Will it last?
    Another repaired heart.
    But will it forget the past?
    I guess she's just bound for another heartbroken.

    Now it's just another day.
    and another thing to get through.
    But will she have the strength to carry on.




    Submitted on 2007-12-13 18:54:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      awww.

    hunn
    i luff yew soooo freakin much

    have you talked to him about you know wat???
    let me know...

    but anyway
    i know that this relationship was hard on you
    and the break up was even worse
    it truly isnt the end of the world
    even though sometimes it feels like it is
    you will always have your friends
    and youll always have me
    | Posted on 2008-02-28 00:00:00 | by truthbetold | [ Reply to This ]


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