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    dots Submission Name: --------SORRY--------dots
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    Author: Blood†Tears
    ASL Info:    17...who cares.my head
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 22/16/25
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 959
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 903



    Description:
       I hate myself. And I deserve to burn. This is my heart...


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    dots--------SORRY--------dots
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    If sorry could fix everything
    I would say it until the day that i died
    and if that's not good enough for you
    then do me a favour
    and ignore these tears i've cried.

    No one ever said life was easy
    it's a chore all the time
    so let this rist of mine bleed
    let the sin seep out
    and let your mind fall away from me.

    Once more I tie this noose
    once more I say enough
    once more I come to this tree
    this is no bluff.

    Once more I tie this noose
    once more I hang it up
    once more I climb this tree
    one my I say enough.

    If saying sorry
    could make things better
    I would say sorry
    Untill the day i died
    and if my bleeding lungs
    cant take anymore
    I'll force out from them
    my sad life.




    Submitted on 2007-12-14 08:42:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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