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The way...


Author: RedneckPrincess
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This is basically the only happy poem I ever wrote & the guy that inspired me to write this is the guy I'm in love with now even though we're not together. We are however, talking about getting back together.


The way...



I'm laying in a field of grass,
Staring at the clouds and thinking of the past.
All the good and bad memories of the days,
Make me smile and thank God for the ways,

The way that my heart beats,
When you are near me,
The way that I know that,
You'll always be with me,
The way that my soul flies,
When we touch,
The way that I can't believe,
I love you this much.

A butterfly lands on my chest,
I smile and watch it and just let it rest.
I want to be with you and fly away.
Like the butterflies,
Hand in hand together through the days.
I love the way that you love me so,
Please hold me tight,
And never let me go.




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