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    dots Submission Name: Night Ghostsdots
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    Author: marigold
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 182/203/89
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsNight Ghostsdots
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    Come my night friends
    come to me
    midnight stares so
    horribly.

    come my friends who
    once I loved
    and cherished freely
    laughingly

    breath your horror
    o'er my face
    gnaw my flesh and
    pierce my eyes

    sweetest dreams turn
    dagger-sharp
    sylph-like beauty
    monstrous cold

    long ago I
    let you go
    long ago I
    murdered you

    Now I pay in
    blood and pain
    sweetest torture
    sweetest wounds

    In the coal-eyes
    in the din
    'midst the shrieks, the
    demon laugh

    still I see the
    dead fall leaves
    long forgotten
    tarnished dew.

    Silence be my
    dying voice.
    Fire cold and
    watery.




    Submitted on 2007-12-14 23:11:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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