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    dots Submission Name: Blind Dog IV - The Aftermath, Part 1dots
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    Author: Derrick Thomas
    ASL Info:    24/Male/Alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 21/59/39
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
    Total Views: 661
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 570



    Description:
       Here is my description since apparently not writing one gets me bitched at by stupid fucks I don't want any input from in the first place:

    This is a continuation of a tale that makes sense to those who it is supposed to make sense to. I did not write this for you to understand, I wrote this for me.


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    dotsBlind Dog IV - The Aftermath, Part 1dots
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    It was funny when I first found him. He was huddled off in a dark corner behind some aged wooden tables with sewing machines on them, not the most appropriate place for a swiss chocolatier to be.

    They thwart the blame away from the dog(that fucking dog), these new faces do. The old man, the cowboy, and now the chocolatier.

    Still lying underneath the thin sheets(layers), the dog continues to hide, to lie, and to regret. He has no time for blame.

    The only thing left to do is wait, things have almost come full circle.




    Submitted on 2007-12-15 05:01:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I find this extremely interesting.

    I also find it interesting that you have taken on all of these personas on myspace at some point in the past.

    I like it.

    I would love to read more from you...I miss those crazy stories you use to write...
    | Posted on 2007-12-17 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      well.
    i have some thoughts on this one.
    but they i feel that i need to think on em a bit more before i ask about em.
    course, and i know this is in vain, you could just tell me.
    you're the cowboy, no?

    i love you
    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-12-16 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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