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    dots Submission Name: my hands tramblingdots
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    Author: sweetme16
    ASL Info:    18/f/who cares
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 108/251/162
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 159
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 611



    Description:
       this is just something i came up after helping my friend Zac find the perfect way to propose to his girlfriend. i imagned what i would feel if i was in her place. (she said yes, by the way)


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    dotsmy hands tramblingdots
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    my hands trembling
    my knees weak

    as i silently stare at you
    on your knees

    feeling the turmiol
    begin deep within me

    love and joy completely
    overwhelming my sense of normalcy

    opening my mouth
    to find i can't speak

    feeling the tears
    start welling up in my eyes

    as i finally manage to move my head up and down

    watching up jump up
    and then kiss me

    i realize that i've just seen
    the start of what true happiness is





    Submitted on 2007-12-16 00:10:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'd fix the typo in the title if I were you. It would be sad if anyone saw it and disgarded it as rubbish, it's a sweet piece.
    | Posted on 2007-12-17 00:00:00 | by gavinspikenard | [ Reply to This ]



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