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when the sun went out

Author: D-Ink
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i wrote this when i had uncertified emotions within me. i shared with you, hoping you'd like it. pls feel free to comment. peace

when the sun went out

when your insanity peaks in,
we are in trouble.

when your eyes are bright and sparkling,
we tremble in fear.

your speeches - both quiet and loud,
sends danger signals in the air.

your touch- incapable of emotions,
lay awake at night.

when we come face to face,
we crumble; while you triumphed.

your words - sharp as knife,
always cutting us

into shredded pieces,
barely missing our targeted hearts.

the day when the sun went out,
we, the tattered ones

marched solemly
with sharpened thoughts and razor tongues.

our minds took a turn -
once a pink; now ashen black with red dashes

is it any wonder
how we manage to ride you down?

slow and beautifully,

the day the sun gone out
we waited - silently.

the time came- swiftly and abrubtly
we delivered

six feet under
was your final abode

a gaping mouth with silent cries
were our present

we watched, we smiled -
mouths twisted in an agonized bliss

- of vision.

Submitted on 2007-12-16 00:35:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  you did a really cool job writing this. i really enjoyed reading it.
| Posted on 2007-12-17 00:00:00 | by Nessyjane | [ Reply to This ]

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