[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: NOSTALGIAdots

    Author: obaid
    ASL Info:    21/M/Gauntlet
    Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 148/93/34
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 558

       This is just a random poetry which I had written for my best friend KRIS...I was really sad after he left for Australia and I was missing hanging out with him and all so I wrote this...
    This poem is for him!

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.


    Those times are gone,
    Your voice now a song.
    Always feeling your absence,
    I cry, and my sorrow deepens!

    Looking around my room
    I encounter a stream of memories.
    It's you everywhere-
    It's your pranks and your stories!

    There is so much to tell you-
    But you are not here to listen!
    I miss you not as a friend
    But as my brethren!

    Days become months...
    Months turn to years!
    I'm still waiting...
    Still sobbing my tears.

    Submitted on 2007-12-16 07:09:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      I really liked this. Its flow was incredibly smooth and it drew me in from the start. The topic is one dear to my heart because i have recently lost a very close friend of my own.

    It is the simple pieces that mean the most in our hearts that turn out to be some of the most beautiful in the end.

    Nice Write!
    | Posted on 2009-09-30 00:00:00 | by dthforeverpain8 | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    written by Daniel Barlow
    Every..... written by jackz
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Linger written by saartha
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Summer written by layDsayD
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    written by Daniel Barlow
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Because of You written by poetotoe
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Fasade written by jackz
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    The Severed Head written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    AI written by poetotoe
    You do, I Do written by poetotoe
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]