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Author: obaid
ASL Info:    21/M/Gauntlet
Elite Ratio:    4.52 - 148 /93 /34
Words: 164
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This is a poem I had written long back when I had to go through a lot of emotions because of a particular girl. I was just going through my diary the other day and I came across this poem...I don't even remember when I had written this...But i do remember WHY I had written this! Try and relate to it ppl!


A polite refusal
To an obscene proposal.
Amateur- you took me to be
You saw infatuation but no love in me.

My feelings for you withered away
They came back and decided to stay...
Nothing I said or did could make you love me
You said:
"How can you love me when you don't know me?"

Isn't liking your simplicity knowing you enough?
Isn't thinking about you every time-
Mean I know you enough?
Don't I feel your mirth and cry your tears
That you say I don't know you enough?

If it has to be so, then I guess I never loved you!
I just loved someone-
Who when I smiled smiled too!
My love was undefined, immature, a perfect folly...
And you were someone who didn't like me enough!
Someone who defined love differently!

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