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    dots Submission Name: Wounded Warrior of Heartsdots
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    Author: Squall Leon Hea
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 104/79/29
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 1020
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsWounded Warrior of Heartsdots
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    wounded warrior yet to heal
    his pain , his enemies are yet to feel

    growing with anger and power aday
    with power and might and nothing to say

    growing stronger and stronger he grows
    training training and losing the flaws

    with eyes as an eagle
    aiming at it's prey

    reaching to the skies above
    after losing his heart's love

    his soul with hope glows
    and with faith it flows

    a true warrior that is he
    looking forward for you and me




    Submitted on 2007-12-16 12:16:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow no comments. guess i get the first one huh. Youre really good at poems!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-12-31 00:00:00 | by kairi bloom | [ Reply to This ]


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