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Wounded Warrior of Hearts

Author: Squall Leon Hea
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Words: 87
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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Wounded Warrior of Hearts

wounded warrior yet to heal
his pain , his enemies are yet to feel

growing with anger and power aday
with power and might and nothing to say

growing stronger and stronger he grows
training training and losing the flaws

with eyes as an eagle
aiming at it's prey

reaching to the skies above
after losing his heart's love

his soul with hope glows
and with faith it flows

a true warrior that is he
looking forward for you and me

Submitted on 2007-12-16 12:16:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow no comments. guess i get the first one huh. Youre really good at poems!!!!!
| Posted on 2007-12-31 00:00:00 | by kairi bloom | [ Reply to This ]

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