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Thank you

Author: rachel gless
ASL Info:    23/f/mx
Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 68 /89 /37
Words: 71
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Thank you

Thank you

Thank you my wishes
Which have come true
Thank you my goals
You’ve helped move on

Thank you for loving
This stubborn soul
Thank you for standing
My crazy thoughts

Thank you for going
With my two fast feet
Thank you for standing
Right next to me

Thank you for being
Just who you are
My love for you goes
Right through the sky

Submitted on 2007-12-16 14:45:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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