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    dots Submission Name: Jumping on the Emo Train <3dots
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    Author: Skyhawk
    Elite Ratio:    5 - 19/38/20
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angst
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       After much absence due to IRL things, I'm back temporarily.

    Here's a poem that you might not like. Again, no description.


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    dotsJumping on the Emo Train <3dots
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    You tore off my masseter, babe.
    You made me speechless, muscle contract
    (conjunction junct)tion
    impaired.

    My heart was replaced with a revolving door.
    Each time I opened, I closed again.
    My function was to be your lover. You
    kicked me out like my mother

    did.

    I cut four straight lines on my biceps after that.
    I walked around shopping malls with red sleeves;
    rubbed people's smiles raw in shirt-stain weaves.

    My primal force lusts for you.
    My mind lusts to kill you.
    My tongue wants to taste your clitoris.
    My Ego is gone, the only thing left is the

    id.

    I want to see your face get crushed by a car,
    you bitch.
    I want to see you catch AIDS from some drunk on a GHB heist,
    you bitch.
    I want to see you die from someone else's hands,
    you bitch.

    There's nothing left of me.
    I'm a pale balloon leaking air.
    I'm a car on its last piece of mileage.
    I'm a wound that wants to Blee

    d.

    The complexion of my face is white.
    I'll haunt you night after night
    without a conjunction.




    Submitted on 2007-12-16 16:17:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Actually, this grows on me. Although, I think I could do without the AIDS line (but then there is a truth to the whole gbh thing too. hmmm stumped now as to how offended I should be).

    Well, since I am a conjuction connoisseur, I am impressed with your fortitude.

    However, I feel the only thing I can say is (and they aren't my words): Ain't love grand!
    ala Havisham.
    | Posted on 2007-12-17 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      Nah. You can't get original by living down there; this poem is so teenage ordinary. But if that's your face in the picture, maybe you're just joshing??
    | Posted on 2007-12-16 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]



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