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    dots Submission Name: Secrets Revealeddots
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    Author: _Osiris_
    ASL Info:    18 Chick Ottawa
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 1/5/56
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 195
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    Bytes: 936



    Description:
       Things havent made much sense this year. This is what I have hidden since the beginning and now the end of the year has almost come Im sharing these feelings and hope things are better in the year to come.


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    dotsSecrets Revealeddots
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    Burned
    Burised
    Battered
    Broken
    The body is hallow
    Lucided thoughts
    Sense of belonging
    Lost

    My skin might be burned
    My pride is bruised
    With my mind battered around
    And a broken heart still bleeds within my chest

    Hiding within this shell
    Finding some way to let go
    Closing my eyes
    Cutting the ties
    To life

    At one point in time
    Life seemed too perfect
    Too perfect to be true
    I believed in one
    So much
    Though blind with the passion
    Called love

    Time comes to pass
    Feelings still linger
    Though unease about his feelings
    Towards me
    Hatred
    Love
    Or nothing at all

    Life is a tricky game
    And this time
    I was in it to win
    But came up short handed
    In the end.




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