In a land
were anything is possible
we danced together
under the lunar eclipse
your lips touched mine
and our heart beats soared
to close for any human
or maybe even any angel
with sorrow over filling your eyes
you turned your head
and looked away
coming upon us
was my worst nightmare
a single grave stone
with a simple rose upon it
you sat down and held my hands
you tried to speak
but angels they cannot be heard
I guess dreams can only last so long
and I couldn't keep you with me
as you turned to go
you whisper some thing
it was faint but I heard it
'' I'll see you again one day."
they say that you feel no pain in dreams
then how did I feel
my heart breaking into a million pieces
once again
it was then that I sat up
clutching at my chest
I watched my breathe infront of my face
I felt my tears when down my cheeks
I whispered to my self
''why do my dreams always seem so real.''
I agree the post below me *points down*
But bravo, I really like it, I was imagining the scene in my head. I would end it a bit differently though, but thats just me ;p
good write-
Safire
Beautiful. I actually wouldn't have minded it ended a little earlier than it did (because to me it seemed to already reach it's climactic point in the middle), but otherwise, perfect.
Submission Name: dreams
