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Submission Name: Be Happy dots

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Author:	Inkybro
ASL Info:	17/M/Oklahoma
Elite Ratio:	3.33 - 55/69/39
Words:	30

Class/Type:	Poetry/The pain inside
Total Views:	80
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	207

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Be Happy dots

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Sneak up on me
You filthy whore
You rotting bitch
Treat me bad
Abuse me
Make me sad
You've used me
Do it
I just want you
To be
Happy

Submitted on 2007-12-16 23:53:33 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
Interesting anger. It kinda grabbed me with it's initial filth and suprised me with its ending.
Direct, and yet some rather subtle rhyming which makes for good contrast.
I like it.
Cheers
A.C

| Posted on 2007-12-17 00:00:00 | by Asakura Cowboy | [ Reply to This ]

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