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    dots Submission Name: The Whole World Is In Your Handsdots
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    Author: Jester_Gesture
    ASL Info:    23/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 365/459/201
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 1148
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 748



    Description:
       I redefine happiness on a regular basis. Today, it's some paper and ink.


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    dotsThe Whole World Is In Your Handsdots
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    It's the moment in your life
    abundant with real-ness,
    tell yourself to feel this;
    the whole world is in your hands.

    Don't close your eyes
    to the brilliance you're facing,
    it's blinding but embracing;
    the whole world is in your hands.

    Grow wings and take flight,
    they can't take this from you, it's yours
    to experience, exclaim, explore;
    the whole world is in your hands.

    It might take you by surprise,
    but it's yours, and your right
    to swim in the sunlight.
    Don't let it go, let it glow in the bright.
    The whole world is in your hands,
    so show the world your light.




    Submitted on 2007-12-17 19:55:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Absolutely wonderous. So much dark in the world today, but as they say it's only because people refuse to look up. I feel this peice speaks worlds on this topic at hand.
    | Posted on 2009-12-01 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]
      There is certainly an air of positivity permeating the words and lines of this piece. In this screwed up world one can only hope that you can maintain this wonderful outlook.
    | Posted on 2007-12-19 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]


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