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Sleeping Pill

Author: Emerging Soul
ASL Info:    48/VERY female/Wisconsin
Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1240 /1114 /244
Words: 394
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Sleeping Pill

Sometimes I lie next to you
And just let my body feel you
You seem so large to me
As I curl around you
Resting my face against your back
In the hollow between your shoulders
I just lie there sometimes
Just to hear you breathe
A film of sweat forms upon our skin
Building between us like a layer of glue
Sticking us together everywhere we touch
I run my fingertips down your arm
And touch your hand
Such a large hand
Nearly twice the size of mine
I've been hurt by this hand before
Simply because you don't know your own strength
And my skin is so soft
So easily bruised
You have learned to be gentle...
Unless I want you to be rough
Then the pleasure from this hand
Can be sweet torture
My hand moves lower
Down the curve of your hip
And then around
To where you stand already at attention
Silky and hard beneath my fingertips
Just the feel of my touch
Has caused this
And the power of this feeds my desire
I can do this to you, still
Even after all these years
I move my hand upon you
And feel you jerk beneath it
Suddenly wanting nothing more
Than to feel you with my tongue
I peel myself away from you
And feel the air chill my skin
You shift to lie on your back
And I feast
I can feel the vibrato of your desire
Knowing how you love this
Knowing how you love me
An incredible tenderness moves through me
As you pull me up to your kiss
I sheath you with my body
Wanting desperately to be filled
Wanting release from the slow burn inside of me
Moving together, silently
In instinctive tandem dance
I control the pace
And drive myself to peak
You join me there
And I can feel you
Every movement every twitch
I lie upon your chest
Not wanting to move
Then as things are wont to do
It is over
I shift slightly to the side
And slide away
I lie in the crook of your arm
And listen to your heartbeat in my ear
Your breathing deepens
And I know you've fallen asleep
Sometimes I lie next to you
And just let my body feel you
To sleep, perchance to dream
Of you

Submitted on 2004-06-25 17:27:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  sleeping pill is not necessarily a title that suggests wild passion. but your poem was very passionate and sensual. very descriptitve and very well written. no criticism. great piece.
| Posted on 2004-06-26 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey, this kind of thing ought to be sensored. It is a very well written account of what you see a get from sex and desire. I have small hands myself, oh well. At least I'm not really small everywhere. ;) Very sensual. You nympho.
| Posted on 2004-06-25 00:00:00 | by Black Rock Tractor | [ Reply to This ]
  Ok. Wow... Uhm... Mew... *blinks* A little... Ok... lets not talk about what it was written about...
I like the style though ^.^ hehe... Very lovely style...
Ah hell screw it!
RAH! Sexual! *giggles* Very descriptive too which can be good or bad depending on the reader. I know some people don't mind it (like me) but others may not... yeah... -_-
Anyways... Good job on writing it... very lovely... yep..
(sorry about the er lack of comment o.O I was at a loss for words)
| Posted on 2004-06-25 00:00:00 | by Childoutspoken | [ Reply to This ]

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