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    dots Submission Name: Prayerdots
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    Author: brokenmuse
    ASL Info:    26/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 756/734/161
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsPrayerdots
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    isolated sunbeams pour
    into and through
    the vermilion stained glass
    filling the veiled cathedral
    with carmine prayers
    the whispers pass through
    the air, like souls
    like my hopes and prayers
    and I intone the echoing, resounding depths of my perverse invocations




    Submitted on 2007-12-17 23:20:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the whispers pass through the air ,like souls,
    cool I thought it was good keep it up
    | Posted on 2007-12-17 00:00:00 | by Diablo Tapitio | [ Reply to This ]


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