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    dots Submission Name: Die, Die, O Bitterness Blindingdots
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    Author: gavinspikenard
    ASL Info:    20-something/m/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 273/334/104
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 336
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    dotsDie, Die, O Bitterness Blindingdots
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    Please peace, come speak to me
    Do not bring grief and do not tease
    I carry such a weight you see
    It bruises and defeats

    What solitude have I to sit in?
    Day by day the doom does chime
    I fear no help will be brought in
    I fear it won't arrive

    Yet something seems to find it's way
    into my meddling
    Beneath the dreadful dark decay
    A voice that whispers softly...
    "Be free, suceed, unleash it all
    Each burden, every piece
    Release
    Release
    Release it all
    Don't wait for time to cease"




    Submitted on 2007-12-18 10:32:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really enjoyed this work of yours.
    It captures some fleeting feeling that I've had before...

    keep up the awesome work.

    <3
    Rose
    | Posted on 2007-12-18 00:00:00 | by Queen_of_spades | [ Reply to This ]



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