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    dots Submission Name: Lost Memoriesdots
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    Author: Xena
    ASL Info:    17/F/Pluto
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 24/20/22
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/I am dead inside
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       I wrote this during the one time I felt like suicide...hope ya like it.


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    dotsLost Memoriesdots
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    I lay in Bed
    With a gun placed beside me
    My thoughts running over my life
    I thought I could live without Love
    But I was wrong
    Because he came
    He stepped into my life
    He had changed it all
    But then he start to fade away
    Leaving me alone
    All I had believed in had been lost
    My heart being smashed
    My world started to crash
    I leave him with my final words
    My day has come, so I must go
    Though my beating heart leaves you
    My burning spirit will stay with you
    For the love I held
    It shall never fail.




    Submitted on 2007-12-18 15:02:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I understand how you felt. I was dating a guy that I thought that I would be with for a long time. He dumped me. I thought that I loved him and tried to repress those emotions because we had to see eachother everyday. Turns out I did love him, but not enough to spend my whole life with him. I was just caught up in the feeling of someone feeling that way for me. Now I feel that way about someone else. What I'm trying to say, is that it'll get better. Gread write/read.
    | Posted on 2008-01-03 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]
      when i was reading this all i could think about was this guy i was dating for about 5 months. i was having some real problems with my life and if he didn't come into it at that moment, i don't know what i would have done, he made my life worth living, and i thought we were great, but deep down i knew we would be over soon, as if on que he called me one day and said he thought we should break-up, he cheated on me with three girls. by then i was numb, i wasn't mad, even though i knew i should be, i wasn't sad even though i knew i should be. i just said "okay, goodbye" and hung up.

    thats the last time i ever sopke to him. And still to this day, i'm not mad. but i do miss his company sometimes, he always mad me laugh, and smile.

    but it's time to move- on there's other fish in the sea, mourn their loss, but don't get trapped with in your sorrow.

    Kayla
    | Posted on 2007-12-19 00:00:00 | by WhY-dO-yOu-CrY | [ Reply to This ]


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