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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    14/f/AK.
    Elite Ratio:    1.59 - 8/13/45
    Words: 229
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 109
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1317



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    Pain, it feels good.
    This dangerous feeling I get when blood spills, Shooting stars and sun sets, i couldn't care less.
    I smile, Oh god, I can't get enough, The warm feeling in my chest.

    a throb and the flame of fire in me, you woke me up.
    You disturbed the hot coals and started the spark, I'm alive again.
    Ive been spinning for a time, what have i missed?

    com'on baby flash those pearly whites my way, i smile too.
    I missed the feel of freedom and wildness. It was true i was broken and tame for a time. I was only sleeping and waiting.
    You woke me up, you started the fire. You threw me off my feet.

    I feel like I've been in a cage built from my rage, the beam of light came in through the small door. I'm outside again, i missed this feeling of healthiness.

    I can run, the sweetness of the wind that blows past my face is enough to make me sick from the euphoria I'm experiencing.

    I laugh in my glorious madness and hope to bring you with me.

    It's alright, running from home and the past is the one thing that never does last.
    Our feet pound against the gravel like heartbeats, we're going faster now.






    Submitted on 2007-12-18 17:40:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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