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slander falls from my lips.

Author: freeradical
ASL Info:    22/feline/london
Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 311 /405 /63
Words: 144
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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one up me. i dare you.

slander falls from my lips.

he asks about my mouth,
such a silly

my mouth is capable
of typhoons,

cnn live feed.

my mouth is perfect:
a lower lip i bite
calculatingly and
sharp little white teeth.

it will rip you up
but not spit you out.

(sex is not wine tasting,
if you're into it,
you swallow.)

the stupid twits
you've taken a liking
to seducing
cannot hold a candle
to this
piece of ass.

this piece of ass
is a sharp mind,
a quick wit.
a french accent that
turns you on
with no sex involved.

you can call me
anything you want.

you may have played
the game before.

but you certainly
don't know the rules
in this part of town.

kiss me. hard.

Submitted on 2007-12-18 17:51:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  (sex is not wine tasting,
if you're into it,
you swallow.)


kiss me. hard.

Double badass.

Hm... it's been a long time since I spoke to you... I think I had a sort of explosion and went on and on about how awesome you are. Not in a scary, stalker way, though... To clarify. To state my case.

Anyway--still digging your stuff :)
(your journal makes me very sad)

Hope you're well, still writing...
| Posted on 2008-06-10 00:00:00 | by sadtrapofgravit | [ Reply to This ]
  Damned, if I weren't so old and on the wrong side of the Atlantic I would leap at the chance to take you up on this offer. Pucker up sister!!!!!
| Posted on 2007-12-18 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

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