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    dots Submission Name: slander falls from my lips.dots
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    Author: freeradical
    ASL Info:    22/feline/london
    Elite Ratio:    5.26 - 311/405/63
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1194
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       one up me. i dare you.


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    dotsslander falls from my lips.dots
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    he asks about my mouth,
    such a silly
    foolish
    question.

    my mouth is capable
    of typhoons,
    sandstorms,
    tsunamis,
    earthquakes.

    cnn live feed.

    my mouth is perfect:
    a lower lip i bite
    calculatingly and
    sharp little white teeth.

    it will rip you up
    but not spit you out.

    (sex is not wine tasting,
    if you're into it,
    you swallow.)

    the stupid twits
    you've taken a liking
    to seducing
    cannot hold a candle
    to this
    piece of ass.

    this piece of ass
    is a sharp mind,
    a quick wit.
    a french accent that
    turns you on
    with no sex involved.

    you can call me
    anything you want.

    you may have played
    the game before.

    but you certainly
    don't know the rules
    in this part of town.

    kiss me. hard.




    Submitted on 2007-12-18 17:51:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      (sex is not wine tasting,
    if you're into it,
    you swallow.)


    Badass.

    kiss me. hard.

    Double badass.

    Hm... it's been a long time since I spoke to you... I think I had a sort of explosion and went on and on about how awesome you are. Not in a scary, stalker way, though... To clarify. To state my case.

    Anyway--still digging your stuff :)
    (your journal makes me very sad)

    Hope you're well, still writing...
    R
    | Posted on 2008-06-10 00:00:00 | by sadtrapofgravit | [ Reply to This ]
      Damned, if I weren't so old and on the wrong side of the Atlantic I would leap at the chance to take you up on this offer. Pucker up sister!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-12-18 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]


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