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A Radical Dissertation, My Weakness.


Author: SlanderousLust
ASL Info:    21/Q/Four inches from you
Elite Ratio:    5.15 - 89 /137 /74
Words: 118
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Average Vote:    1.0000
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A Radical Dissertation, My Weakness.



Kiss you hard?
I'll kiss you softly
just to spite you.
I'll contradict myself,
while running a muck
across your smug smile.

Your words are fluid,
or they will be.
Filled with bubbly ecstasy
via orgasmic conversation.

I'll displease you,
leave you wanting.
vindictive and belligerent
phrases, will so casually
fall from my smirking mouth.
I'll confound you at every turn,
leaving your plans in ruin.

Hunter? Hunted?
There is no fucking difference,
I'll take the joy out of infidelity
though my masochistic desires.

Make no assumptions,
You'll have what you want,
But it won't seem so great
after you've used it.








Submitted on 2007-12-18 18:23:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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