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(sub)Missionary.


Author: SlanderousLust
ASL Info:    21/Q/Four inches from you
Elite Ratio:    5.15 - 89 /137 /74
Words: 67
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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(sub)Missionary.



I'm anticipating you,
not only your body
but your mind,
your wit,
your attitude.

My fists clinch
in futile self-abhorrence
fickle self-destruction.
minute decisions,
and distrust.

I'd slay you,
remove your veil
of open love,
disintegrate the
self-dissociation
that forces you to
feel as if actions mean nothing.

I'd love to fuck you,
but I'd rather perceive you.
Understand you,
fulfill you.





Submitted on 2007-12-18 22:05:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this makes me purr.
| Posted on 2007-12-18 00:00:00 | by freeradical | [ Reply to This ]


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