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Author: LameMansTerms
ASL Info:    36/M/Hermosa Beach, Ca
Elite Ratio:    4.31 - 713 /1012 /165
Words: 92
Class/Type: Lyrics /Misc
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The HomeLess MillionAirs


it comes down to you
directions that we choose
looking back on how we grew
and time we chose to lose
it's not like it was when we started
so many gone --half hearted
so tough
so what
it's known
when it comes down to you
we are- all alone

we are-all alone

we drive for miles
no breaks
fake smiles
I'm so sorry
no fucking worries
we'll hit the shop--soon one day
and get alot of what
we never needed anyway

we are-all alone


Submitted on 2007-12-19 11:32:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really liked your poem.For a few moments it made me think about the world ending and how we all have made mistakes.But.....thats just me but as I said I really enjoyed it.It speaks volumes without really trying.So well done

the girl who cried wolf to much
| Posted on 2007-12-20 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]

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