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    dots Submission Name: "this needs a title"dots

    Author: bluecrane
    ASL Info:    19/F/WASHINGTON
    Elite Ratio:    3.61 - 70/83/26
    Words: 324
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 881
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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       there's not much flow to it, it's mostly a therapeutical poem for me.

    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dots"this needs a title"dots

    Last night I spoke with God.
    Not about the joy life brings.
    I said, "I love you, I love you not,
    Why am I in such pain?"

    He said, "my dear child,
    I love you so,
    But your happiness stops sometimes.
    It's the hardships I give, and to you I bring,
    To make you human, and to help you see.

    Not everyday is suffering, like you say,
    Did I not bring you that joyous day?
    You fell in love with someone so great,
    So why is it me that you hate?"

    "God I do not hate,
    I don't understand,
    Why there must be pain among man"

    "My dear child, to make you see,
    You must cherish the moments life brings,
    I'm not one to judge, I forgive everything,
    Your pain only comes when you don't believe.

    I gave you the power to see right from wrong,
    I'm holding your hand to guide you along
    Through the darkened tunnels, I'm always there
    I carry you through broken glass, when your feet are bare."

    "If all you say is true,
    Why do I not believe in you?
    I prayed to you to stop this pain,
    Why, Why, Why didn't you answer?"

    "My dear child I did you see,
    You just couldn't hear my answer,
    Your heart has locks and you shut me out,
    Which makes me believe
    I can't give you help for anything
    If you don't have faith in me.

    So darling, my dear, have no fear,
    I will give you wings,
    Continue to battle the evil inside,
    Please have faith in me.

    Good only comes when you can see,
    Not all is dark for thee,
    Follow your heart for I am there,
    To help you see the brighter things."

    I sat down and though real hard,
    Then it dawned on me,
    My horrible days come and go,
    But good memories always stay with me.

    Submitted on 2007-12-19 13:21:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Firtst of let me just say when I first clicked on this poem and saw the length,I almost clicked the back button.But then I though about it.What if thats what soomeone did to my own work,I would be highly upset.Do I stayed with it and read.....and now Im glad I did. ^.^

    Your poem relates to everyone without beinning tp specific.You write as if it is about yourself but everyone can apply it to at least one aspect of their life.If they only think about it and even then it shouldnt be that hard to figure out.

    So as to regards to your poem its a oone in a million.Why?Because it simply tells us in a polite way what we take for granted everyday.

    So thanks for the read!

    -the girl who cried wolf to much
    | Posted on 2007-12-20 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]

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