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    dots Submission Name: Give me the night away~dots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 47/53/41
    Words: 303
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 191
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsGive me the night away~dots
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    Just a complete surprise, you whisper a call to me for a rush~

    I hear your voice, and my heart goes wild and crazy

    Call me away to our dark secret corner, everything seems soo alive again

    A million dates all over my life, but yours seem timeless



    What happen between us?

    Did work get in the way? did we realise that we are too different?

    Was it my wedding ring? Or was it yours?

    Was it me? was it you...



    Order the champagne, sparkling and dazzling like your eyes

    I could dream the night away in them...

    Everything about you is a tease, playing my heart on a string

    And only your hands with me can play a melody soo fine...



    Where are my lines? what do I say...

    What happen to all I have learnt about women?

    I just realise it doesnt matter...it just doesnt matter

    Being close to you like this, you make Iife a dream...



    Give me a dime, let it flip through mind a memory

    What happen to all the plans we made?

    A roll of jazzy dices, tumble through chances and fate

    What happen to our love?



    Tasting your lips, red as a rose

    What a gorgeous kiss, what a flame...

    A touch of skin, soft as silk

    What a thrill, the world just burns...



    A waiter pulls in chairs at what was once our table,

    He clears it without thinking, only to hear two rings on the floor

    A pause and an sight

    Just 2 wedding rings...













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