Description: Want to see your true mantle ? Shake the dust !
Shaking The Dust -------------------------------------------
To live in the woods of desire
In respect to ego's aspire
Is a wondrous hunt for the peer
within to make all things so clear
As to which trees to sit beneath
And which to forsake in relief
when burdens lay with desire
There is that wind tickling at leaves
Like a living soul that breathes
Upon ego's tilted game
listening which way the wind
While feasting on thoughted dreams
Empty as a vacant feel
Of how the otherwise can live.
This is the journey emptying soul
That aspirants make as goal
In decide which fork in the road
Can give a mean to life's true code
Breaking through those swamps of desire
To change that which is in the fire
Looking at ashes left behind.
I like this piece a lot. It depicts having a crush very well. At the end, are you saying that you have to go beyond the crush, and see that it is a waste? or sometime else altogether?
It seems like you are saying that most of the time, to follow a crush means you are turning your back on others. Sorry if this is way off the intended meaning.
But yeah, i enjoyed it very much, the flow feels a little awkward in a few lines, but not enough to cite specific lines.