The After Laughter...it wasn't too funny
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just a little poem about me and my dog Max--he is so cool!--lol
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The After Laughter...it wasn't too funny
“The After Laughter… It Wasn’t Too Funny” -- Stuck in this rectangle box Fucking death It really sux I aint getting out I wont be going on My body will lie here And my soul is already gone -- Dieing the other day Meeting my maker What would I say to her? It didn’t matter… She just laughed And turned and walked away. -- If I knew what I know now And somehow let it all go It would have come back around So now the only sound Are worms in and out my eyes Seeing is believing And death Makes me want to be alive -- no no no no I don’t want to die It’s not a better place no no no no -- No amazing grace Not a familiar face The after life I never found Not a single trace -- no no no no I don’t want to die It’s not a better place no no no no -- It all ends When they put you in the ground -- lamemansterms |
Submitted on 2007-12-20 01:21:25 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Freakin' awesome! It's totally unique...I've never seen or heard of a poem about someone being in a coffin and wishing they had just lived life out. Sweet concept. I'm never committing suicide now......:) dancer-of-words | Posted on 2007-12-20 00:00:00 | by dancer-of-words | [ Reply to This ] | I did enjoy it. love the title but i wasn't expecting it to be about death. All the better though. I liked the subject as much as the witty language. | | Posted on 2007-12-20 00:00:00 | by nomad knight | [ Reply to This ] | |
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