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    dots Submission Name: White Powder Golddots
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    Author: whendt
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 902/387/108
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Spoof/Legend
    Total Views: 1376
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1030



    Description:
       A poem about Lara Croft(smile)


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    dotsWhite Powder Golddots
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    Come back and play Miss Croft.
    Alexander has a new mystery for you.
    The world is your playground,
    And nothing is too hard for you.
    You have been to Greece ,
    You have been to Rome,
    But Buckinghamshire is your home.
    Your father is gone,
    But they say time heals all wounds.
    I wont ask you to go back to The
    Cradle of Life.
    Because that would end all life.
    Indiana Jones found the Arc of the Covenant,
    And had some Nazi’s over for a Bar B Q.
    James Bond plays with the ladies too much,
    And he works for the Queen.
    Need I say more.
    Your mission if you so choose.
    Takes you to Samaria.
    A race of people there claim
    To be of alien descent .
    There you will find the answers to life.
    How they built the Pyramids,
    Where God came from
    And “White Powder Gold.”
    “ Food of the Gods.”
    “ Manna from Heaven.”
    So Lady Croft will you answer the call…




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    ||| Comments |||
      good write
    happy
    keep up

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    | Posted on 2007-12-25 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
      lol..i like it..its playful and light...good work
    | Posted on 2007-12-20 00:00:00 | by N0shin | [ Reply to This ]


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