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    dots Submission Name: Ms. Perfect's Private Torture Timedots
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    Author: gavinspikenard
    ASL Info:    20-something/m/USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 273/334/104
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Rant/The pain inside
    Total Views: 263
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 943



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    dotsMs. Perfect's Private Torture Timedots
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    Cough drop...corn crop...
    Things I see through an ink blot
    Mom, I don't belong in this place
    My face is scarred from side effects
    Medicinal principles
    Love that's conditional
    Loathing the day for it's layout of pills
    Controller on a roll
    My leash is taut y'know?
    A heap of black sin on a sunny complexion
    Expressions of mine never make the connection

    You're killing your son (I concur)
    You're spilling his blood (murderer)

    A lack of conviction visible,
    hides not the knicks and dents
    Making things worse with improvement
    Nervously laughing to maintain illusions
    Cursing well-being with plundering plights
    Perpetually wrong, yet fixated on "right"
    A demeanor of arrogance, classical crime
    You belong in the zoo that you've placed your boy into




    Submitted on 2007-12-20 10:32:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW, i'm not really sure whats going on, but once i got through the first couple of sntences it got my attention, and i had to finish it. and i love the rythme sceme you added, it didn't sound forced at all
    | Posted on 2007-12-20 00:00:00 | by WhY-dO-yOu-CrY | [ Reply to This ]



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